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Made for consumption,

I waste my life trying to

make my flesh taste good.

Each Haiku work so well alone and when combined even better. Really clever.

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Thank you so much!

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Haikus are hard to write, and you did this one right. I like the theme of this, which shows how this person needs someone else that also needs to know they’re worth it.

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Thank you, I really appreciate that!

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A beautiful, sad journey. So recognizable.

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Thank you so much!

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Beautiful and raw, thank you for sharing. I love haiku as a form of poetry. How visceral. Heartbreaking. <3

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